LI: to Write down your dream job you want to have.
This week for summer learning journey we had to write a poster of our dream job. Then we had to how we are going to get the job a lot of people picked rugby. i picked basketball because that was my
fave sport to play.
Hello Dayton,
ReplyDeleteBeing a basketball player would be fun because your job would be something that you loved. Though in your blurb and in the text in your poster you have some spelling mistakes, and some mistakes in your sentences. Its nice to hear that your Dad is going to help you.
Good Job!
Hi Dayton!
ReplyDeleteThis blog post was great, next time attribute your photos to give credit to the person that owns the image.
Blog you later!
~ Florence
Good Evening Dayton,
ReplyDeleteI am Samuel, a Year 7 student attending Sacred Heart College. I am part of a trial period in which they are trying out students to be blog commenters, which means it is my first experience with this sort of position. However, I did complete the Summer Learning Journey as a student in previous years.
I liked reading your blog post and potentially, your interests. I am definitely not a sportsman, but I do like playing around for fun. Basketball has always been a fascinating sport to me, with all the precision and accuracy professional bascketballers have with aiming when shooting hoops. Not only will it be a fun sport that you love, but also the financial contracts are very high. I love classical music, and play a lot of different genres, (except pop, rock and heavy metal) but my favourite is baroque and classical. I could see myself being a successful musician, but I also have a huge appreciation with the sciences, and love teaching others, so I could see myself as a teacher or principal.
Your blog post is very good, but don't forget to attribute the images you use. Attributing images is the act of acknowledging the source. This is very important for college and later on in life. Apart from that, Well done, Dayton.
Kind Regards,
Samuel